tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6310932026414002755.post6632137728329793750..comments2023-10-30T06:56:44.513-07:00Comments on An Artist in Beacon, NY: This sentence is my novel.James Westwaterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06244397625471191032noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6310932026414002755.post-22172552855766193322010-11-01T15:07:24.473-07:002010-11-01T15:07:24.473-07:00It builds nicely but the denouement goes on a bit ...It builds nicely but the denouement goes on a bit long. (The punctuation seems, in a word, excessive.) This paragraph is my critical analysis.Zach Rodgershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09171455139064190916noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6310932026414002755.post-6169985248288396922010-11-01T12:36:12.982-07:002010-11-01T12:36:12.982-07:00how novel is this, my sentence.how novel is this, my sentence.sydney cooperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295268417611364773noreply@blogger.com