A Poem, Part II

Another option is to remove the offending words, altogether.  Editing is good.  The resulting arrangement has a certain economic grace, I think:

An almost empty book

Hope and write the 

Pages turn

The text meanders

Like a

Glimpsed from a passing train

Between

Now that I see the cropped version, I might be inclined to lose a word or two more and shunt some lines:

An almost empty book

Hope

And write the pages

Turn the text

Meanders

Glimpsed from a passing

Train between

or

An almost empty book

Hope and write

The pages turn

The text meanders

Glimpsed from a passing train

Or return to the original poem and bring back the buzzed-out words, but change their order:

An almost empty train

Hope and promise write the book

Pages turn a brook

The text trees

Like a story

Glimpsed from passing 

Between themselves

Finally, freed from stricture and formulae, and after two cups of tea (but before breakfast):

Book

An almost empty train

Like a turning promise

A brook the text between trees

Passing themselves

A story glimpsed

Write

or 

A book

An almost empty train

A brook glimpsed between trees

Yup, that's my favorite.